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01-17-2008, 03:50 AM
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 Status: Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 533
|  Could he restart it again? This forum seems dying  ......let me post something that I wrote this week in a trip .......I still feel difficulty in writing poems ..bear with me once again  Could he restart it again? Encouraged….he struggled hard with steps on the sandy beech, A premise for a dream and the place he gotta reach. Gushing Atlantic breeze and a poor manikin within haze, Sweating and burning to come out of a love-maze. Don’t remember the number of sand-castles he built ashore, Many times he snuggled…. forgetting agility and abhor. A southern demon bulldozed his citadel and did demolition, Brutally tore it down without a lenient consideration. Whales were popping out for him to give a conspiratorial grin, Seagulls, ducks, ospreys have forgotten their preys and sin. See those lobsters and crabs in the traps, they also have empathy, He was tarnished and tormented for loosing a thing he made for thee. He was there again to built another castle offshore, But neither had same enthusiasm and resilience he needed to roll. Rippled he was with resentment, gone was the evolution of mellowness once again I wish… he takes back a refuge into her heart and restart it again.
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01-17-2008, 02:48 PM
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 Status: Moderator Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: On earth, ofcourse Posts: 1,558
|  hey, good to see ya here Amazing poem..just speechless to say anything but wonderful ...You do write good.. I miss reading your poems..do write more and keep posting here
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01-18-2008, 04:45 AM
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Status: Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 533
| hey, same here .."me" glad to see ya here after a long gap...betn..thanks for the encouragement
__________________ " There is no tangible value in being superior to others, but it has a great value in being superior to your former self " Last edited by TanTrick; 05-13-2008 at 12:24 AM.. | ||||||||
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01-21-2008, 06:21 PM
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 Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: below the sky and above the ground :) Posts: 1,235
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hmmm.. beautifully composed indeed.. and yeah.. the words are so thoughtfully written... i love it peace!
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01-22-2008, 02:17 AM
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....................thnx
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