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Old 12-01-2007, 01:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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-dedicated to a friend of mine who is going through some tough times these days.

“How could you”

How could you say your life is always meant to suffer?
Stand at the end of line, hands inside the empty jar
How could you say happiness is never meant for you?
Like a cold pillow wake up every morning, loneliness nothing-new
Even though your desires are infinite
Every steps you take is always right
Just open your eyes find reasons to smile and sing
Give some time, every dark clouds has silver lining
Let this darkness go by; morning light will bring fresh dew
You will get what you wanted, happiness will follow through.

You have always got everything you ever wanted
You gave away your favorite things people demanded
On all their mistakes forgiveness you granted
You called it your path to eternity peace to your mind
Isn’t that where you stand, bitterness leaving behind
You were born great lived to be the best, in the word you differ
And now how could you still complain your life is meant to suffer?
How could you say happiness is never meant for you?
Like a cold pillow wake up every morning, loneliness nothing-new
Let this darkness go by; morning light will bring fresh dew
You will get what you wanted, happiness will follow through.

You have healed wounds with your touch
You have cared for those in need and such
You have sheltered those discarded from the world
Your stories of immensity have been unsung and untold
Yet found reasons to smile, though you never shone like gold
You are liked and loved all along; give them time to be tougher
You will find ways to smile, for the last time you won’t suffer.
Just open your eyes find reasons to smile and sing
Give some time, every dark clouds has silver lining
Let this darkness go by; morning light will bring fresh dew
You will get what you wanted, happiness will follow through.

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good one....

very thoughtfully written.. very powerful words...

beautifully composed!

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Thanks for your beautiful comments!
Glad you liked it.

I appreciate it,thanks.
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hey!!!!!
a beautiful creation with lots of '''' arti''''
better to read by all and follow somewhat somehow!!!!!

what do u think??
cant dedicate the poem like this to single person .....................
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umm...I am not sure what 'arti' means...
are you trying to say "aarati" ...

thanks for your comments.

yeah may be we should share!
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aarati re
arti nai vaneko
''arti vaneko ghatriko ni sunnuparchha'' vanne ukhan nasuneko??????
arti means good suggestion hola hou, thyakka ta malai ni aayena..............
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oh,that makes so much sense now...see thats what happens when you mix nepali with english ...i was thinking you were either trying to say arti--as in artificial or arti-as arati(those vajans and kirtans)..

but it was so funny,I could have never come out with that guess though.just like one of the song..
"getting better all the time"
Thanks anjana.
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senseful poem, senseful reply!!!!
re kya,

u r welcome by the way...............
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