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Status: Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: if i knew where i lived...i wouldnt be here Posts: 39
| -dedicated to a friend of mine who is going through some tough times these days. “How could you” How could you say your life is always meant to suffer? Stand at the end of line, hands inside the empty jar How could you say happiness is never meant for you? Like a cold pillow wake up every morning, loneliness nothing-new Even though your desires are infinite Every steps you take is always right Just open your eyes find reasons to smile and sing Give some time, every dark clouds has silver lining Let this darkness go by; morning light will bring fresh dew You will get what you wanted, happiness will follow through. You have always got everything you ever wanted You gave away your favorite things people demanded On all their mistakes forgiveness you granted You called it your path to eternity peace to your mind Isn’t that where you stand, bitterness leaving behind You were born great lived to be the best, in the word you differ And now how could you still complain your life is meant to suffer? How could you say happiness is never meant for you? Like a cold pillow wake up every morning, loneliness nothing-new Let this darkness go by; morning light will bring fresh dew You will get what you wanted, happiness will follow through. You have healed wounds with your touch You have cared for those in need and such You have sheltered those discarded from the world Your stories of immensity have been unsung and untold Yet found reasons to smile, though you never shone like gold You are liked and loved all along; give them time to be tougher You will find ways to smile, for the last time you won’t suffer. Just open your eyes find reasons to smile and sing Give some time, every dark clouds has silver lining Let this darkness go by; morning light will bring fresh dew You will get what you wanted, happiness will follow through. Last edited by Explorer; 12-01-2007 at 02:01 AM.. | ||||||||
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Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: below the sky and above the ground :) Posts: 1,235
| good one.... very thoughtfully written.. very powerful words... beautifully composed! <peace!
__________________ Experience is the best teacher, it could be of high price sometimes! | ||||||||
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Status: Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: if i knew where i lived...i wouldnt be here Posts: 39
| Thanks for your beautiful comments! Glad you liked it. I appreciate it,thanks. | ||||||||
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Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: i have no permanent house in earth till yet.. Posts: 464
| hey!!!!! a beautiful creation with lots of '''' arti'''' better to read by all and follow somewhat somehow!!!!! what do u think?? cant dedicate the poem like this to single person ..................... | ||||||||
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Status: Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: if i knew where i lived...i wouldnt be here Posts: 39
| umm...I am not sure what 'arti' means... are you trying to say "aarati" ... thanks for your comments. yeah may be we should share! | ||||||||
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Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: i have no permanent house in earth till yet.. Posts: 464
| aarati re arti nai vaneko ''arti vaneko ghatriko ni sunnuparchha'' vanne ukhan nasuneko?????? arti means good suggestion hola hou, thyakka ta malai ni aayena.............. | ||||||||
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Status: Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: if i knew where i lived...i wouldnt be here Posts: 39
| oh,that makes so much sense now...see thats what happens when you mix nepali with english ...i was thinking you were either trying to say arti--as in artificial or arti-as arati(those vajans and kirtans).. but it was so funny,I could have never come out with that guess though.just like one of the song.. "getting better all the time" Thanks anjana. | ||||||||
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