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"the most tragic writer" are you??? Tragic and love poems goes hand in hand isnt it... how can you write a tragic things without the expression of love ... neither how can your love poems will be complete without the fear of tragedy...and as for saying you need lots of thinking and lotta imagination to write it.... life itself is good poem... all you need is a sight to watch it and nice vocabularies to express it... and I think you got both!!!

Beside my suggestion dont try to wear a custom of zebra when you are stallion yourself.

[i]"Intoxicated Love"

when you remain silent, i hear your voice;
with your happiness, i rejoice!
the intoxication and the spirit makes my heart restless;
when in your arms, the world seems tasteless![/I]

if world is tasteless how can you enjoy it... falling in love is enjoying the world much more isnt it


i am flying in the air, and swinging in the clouds~
hold me tight, don’t lose me in the crowds.
your amorousness and allure i extol,
your solicitous behavior wins my soul

your first line expressess freedom ... while other one wants to be captives...


draped in your embrace are both beauty and grace;
these bonds of passion and love, i failed to trace.
our drams blend into the realms of reality;
failure to trust you in the past, was a great blow to my vanity..


in the waves of your love, i am drowning;
the title of falling in love, i see myself crowning!
i sit in your arms with my head on your shoulder;
your confidence in my dreams, makes me bolder.

In dreams???


to tell you what u mean to me, i cant find the words alone;
lacking words, i compliment you about the smell of your cologne.
the heart of the flames have been set afire;
you transport me into the shores, with your satire.

satire???

let this season of love remain stable,
allow the flow to remain permanent and invariable..
build the dance floor with the bricks of love,
and let the fragrances suffuse everything above..

Are you into unstable love darling


i wonder if this love has been traveling for years;
through the journey, i encountered happiness and tears.
now that you and i cruise the same way;
whatever might be the cost, together we shall pay!

same way same direction doesnt means same consequences does it.... you are not even in the same boat

just my thoughts.... thats why I called it sounds teen

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Experience is the best teacher, it could be of high price sometimes!

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water is tasteless; yet, i enjoy every drop of it.. it keeps me alive.. falling in love.. i'd say.. is enjoyin "fallin in love".. i dont kno abt enjoyin the world itself


so you want the world as the water ....tasteless...... well I wont say anything .. if you intend to enjoy every drop of world as water... As you yourself once said Yeah, a true love story is never about love. It’s about the sunlight. It’s about memory. It’s about sorrow. It’s about people who never write back and people who never listen or pay attention.

I agree with you there ... but restless heart and tasteless world.... a bit difficult metaphor there to understand isn`t it

democracy invites freedom; yet it has some restrictions.. similarly, when in love, u could feel the freedom but then again.. there are other restrictions to it..

In real action I know there is always restricitions but does that means that we have to put restrication on our feelings.. emotions too ... and democracy and love... they are far apart terms isnt it....

tell me about "ONE" thing that you would consider to be stable.. as of yet.. i cant claim anything to be stable... at least in my world

now tell me if you know that everything is unstable then why you are looking for stable things

if same directions meant same consequences.. life would have been a "one-way path" ... if being in the same boat would make things less complicated.. world would have been "perfect"

Nah.... even faith of being in the same boat ... same place might be different... now we are talking about moving on the same direction only ... not necessary that price you ppls going to pay will be the same right

and yes.. m just 15... turning 16 soon... its obvious that everything i write would sound "teen" duh!

now I understand that I wasnt mistaken... you have spirit of teens .. and for 16years girl that is quiet a nice work I wont complain more... but I hope you dont get much heart by being teens ... girls wants to reduce their age in anyway though

and lastly, those are just MY THOUGHTS as well!
so are my thoughts as well hehehehehe

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water is the purest of all.. heard that somewhere.. and i do believe in that as well.. and if i could be fortunate enough to taste the purity.. sure.. i would have no problems at all..
restless heart and tasteless world.. it could have been difficult to understand them when pinned in together.. but then again.. its the matter of perspectives..

i wouldnt say "far" apart.. apart for sure.. but then they kinda sorta interconnect i believe.. i might be wrong.. but then again.. its the matter of the phases u pass.. and the experiences

you know love is not just about "happiness" and yet we fall in love at one point or the other.. you know we die.. yet, we live every moment of our lives.. and sometimes in a way where its hard to believe that death exists.. you know you need to be honest to your spouse after u get married.. and yet, there are some poeple (not all) that play games... therefore, i'd say.. even though we know things aren't stable, we still wished they were stable
I got very hard time understanding what you really want to tell me over here.. why only after marriage??.... man should be honest all the time... atleast that is what I have been taught of... beside life and death is not opposite things... since they are not antonyms .. the relationship between death and life is not as easy ... As for asking for stability... I know everything in the universe tends towards the stability... my question was .. whether you desired the unstable love or what???

every human has their own debts they need to pay off.. and none of them have the same amount that they need to pay off.. be it ppl who are in love.. or the people who seek happiness in their dreams..

see now you understand it.... where as your lines in the poems says whatever might be the cost together we shall pay... now you have understood that nobody can pay off for the debts of the others... monetarily might be possible though hehehehe

yeah.. i have that spirit in me.. and m glad, u are finally convinced that what i wrote was what i could have written.. naw i aint seeking hearts by calling myself a teen here.. everyone around here looks matured and aged.. why would i seek hearts from PEOPLES (thats what u'd have called people) that are 30+ hehehehehe

what makes you say that I am convinced with what you have written...its rather seems that you are more convinced with the words I am saying ..... but yeah if you were 16 ... I wont have minded it... but surely I aint convinced from the one who have written more balanced one earlier... then again if it satisfies you ... and cheers you who am I to say anything.. Let me chant one line that I have read somewhere which might answer your last segregration... if you can not love all... then you cant love one...it might be merely infatuation but not love... ages doesnt matter much for true lovers ... does it???

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Clicker teso saks ali nahepa taa.. " teen teen bhayo.. and what not.. "nalaykhana... hehehehehehe....saks lay kabita laykhanai chodisakyo....saks ko poems aayena ki bore huncha ho forum ...also you were trying kill an emerging poet

Saks I really adore your imagination..please imagine more

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