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06-16-2008, 09:08 AM
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 Status: Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: K-Town Posts: 5
 |  To my Mom!!!! R.I.P 1965-2007 How do I begin writing something like this? It hurts thinking back, the memories I reminisce My hand moves vigorously scribing these verbs Not missing a beat as my heart speaks these words My body numbs at times, can’t steady my hands Sweat running into tears as I have thoughts of sands Waves crashing on the beach, tides bubbling in Your Sunset glows the brightest, shining from within I keep watching the horizon, unable to find relief A piece of our puzzle is missing, Im still in disbelief It still hasn’t completely hit me, the reality I have to accept Wishing this was a dream, though its been 2 days and I haven’t slept My eyelids close flush, holding reality at bay I imagine my lips moving, hoping you hear what I say “Thank you for being a friend, that was just the start” “Your such an amazing person, you will never leave my heart” “Even more you made me family, that will never go away” “Every time you call me Son, that feeling will always stay” “Even if im not around, you are always on my mind” “I just close my eyes like this……see your easy to find” “quick, im losing concentration, reality is beginning to tug” “Daylight starts to peek through as I embrace you with a hug” I drift back to this place, my pencil hasn’t even made a smear The blue lines faded and blurred, My paper is soaked in tears I know I didn’t get to say those things for you to hear But that tingle I feel up my spine lets me know you are near A wonderful woman, more then I could ever begin to write I see you twinkling, as I look to the stars in the sky tonight All day ive been thinking about the laughter that we shared My heart constantly sinking, hoping you realize how much I cared As I write this from my on perspective, I know others can relate You made so many friends, drawn together from this unmerited fate How do I progress from here, with the past frequently filling my head I try to move on, still knowing there’s so much more to be said It comforts me knowing you’re up there watching us all from above As the words write themselves im filled with this feeling of love The warmth washes away the tears, the sadness begins to seal I will always remember the years, long after this hurt begins to heal Permanently etched in my soul, remaining with every dawn, Mom, you are missed by many, your love will always live on | ||||||||
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06-18-2008, 04:50 AM
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 Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: below the sky and above the ground :) Posts: 1,235
| awwwww!!!! one of the very best poems around in this forum.. *two thumbs up to ya* Quote:
keep it coming.. stick around, and yes, welcome to nepalhub! Ive seen u chatting, i never knew u could write  <peace!
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06-21-2008, 10:37 AM
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Status: Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: K-Town Posts: 5
| well..i guess i got no other choice but to stick around
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06-26-2008, 01:00 AM
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 Status: Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 533
| I go with Shakira like... "awwwww!!!! one of the very best poems around in this forum.. *two thumbs up to ya*".......keep on writin' more ..cheers
__________________ " There is no tangible value in being superior to others, but it has a great value in being superior to your former self " | ||||||||
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