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Reply With Quote"When embraced by your words, I felt all flushed with fever,Originally Posted by shakira
You seem so unpredictable, similar to that silently flowing river"
superb!
well written .... TWO_THUMPS_UP
"So Vulnerable"
I always loved to prove you wrong and I was always right,
Illusions have been hurtful and they have made me fight!
I thought I knew everything that you ever would
Never invested time in getting to know you; when I knew I could!
May be I was bitter, jealous, or cold,
Things I desired to say, remained untold!
Spent more of our time arguing and debating,
That is how I learned to love, by hating!
When embraced by your words, I felt all flushed with fever,
You seem so unpredictable, similar to that silently flowing river
Your words tended to cut me through my bones,
Did still crave for your songs, and the tones!
There remained nothing I could have interrogated
Things have not been as per what had been predicted.
Placed myself in a position in the hope to score,
And here I say, sentiments I can’t hide, not anymore!
<peace!
Experience is the best teacher, it could be of high price sometimes!
"When embraced by your words, I felt all flushed with fever,
You seem so unpredictable, similar to that silently flowing river"
superb!
well written .... TWO_THUMPS_UP
" There is no tangible value in being superior to others, but it has a great value in being superior to your former self "
thank you... thanks much!"When embraced by your words, I felt all flushed with fever,
You seem so unpredictable, similar to that silently flowing river"
superb!
well written .... TWO_THUMPS_UP
<peace!
Experience is the best teacher, it could be of high price sometimes!
Fantastic.. very powerful. Loved it.Keep up the good work and keep it coming..more often..May be I was bitter, jealous, or cold,
Things I desired to say, remained untold!
Spent more of our time arguing and debating,
That is how I learned to love, by hating
Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away
superb... ur each word hs power. keep it up
Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.
hmm sis...very strong words out there...good as always
thank you!
<peace!
Experience is the best teacher, it could be of high price sometimes!
laale.. thank you!!! feels good to see u posting in hub!!! keep it coming!superb... ur each word hs power. keep it up
<peace![/B]
Experience is the best teacher, it could be of high price sometimes!
hehe thanks.. k ho bela bela gayab bhai dine? not fair.. stick around! good to see ur comments here! thank you!hmm sis...very strong words out there...good as always
<peace!
Experience is the best teacher, it could be of high price sometimes!
May be I was bitter, jealous, or cold,
Things I desired to say, remained untold!
Spent more of our time arguing and debating,
That is how I learned to love, by hating!
I like the way you expressed things in these lines.... you must be really lucky to have love that you develop by arguing ... debating... or say in your word by hating...
but I dont get along with your title... "so vulnerable"...
Love always makes you vulnerable.... why worry about that... instead... you better free your mind... open your sentiments!!!
pyar bhi kya cheej hai ... shakku jaise ko sayar bana de ta hai!!! hehehehehehe
