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06-18-2008, 11:35 AM
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 Status: Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: K-Town Posts: 5
 |  A Verse! Keep the pages torn, the battle breaks and I’m waging wars, the invading force, a pillaged pattern never to mistake the door that spills blood with ya fate to mourn, With mercies key hole, temperance for the air you breathe, I’m the Reapers easel, Path to domination, a closed circuit, soul vacant with no purpose…treasons needle, To begin at a characters flaw, “thy kingdom come” only if it’s apparent to ya God, No clairvoyant pause, when baring tha laws paring libels right to declare its cause The corrosion of marble in a structure, columns carnal to rupture the darkness that crumbles the marvel of wonder of how life ‘stands’ in divine trance (Gods techno startled an bunkered )when I’m the Pagan art, skilled to ‘usher’ get a grip, taste the salt, sit to sip the grains of fault ill inflict the liquor swigs with River styx to emblaze the cross from an age of froth to a blown belittled disassembled symbol of ancient swamps watch me turn a phrase to mar the place of cost of where you graze the gloss of poked holes in your tenors tent each blisters expenditure meanders on M.C. Eschers lens all together in a better blend… shhiiiitt, frappe till ‘U turn’, the price will never end jabbing the jovial till the flashlights run dry wave goodbye as I drive guns high wit enough pride to shatter the sparkle of why?..u marching to die thatz in any sluts eye so kiss ya kid on the forehead.. the shores bled… ill take the shirt off ya back, and bond your tab… theres nothin more said…execpt “Father which art in heaven…” Damons Modern mask, his dust… is to where you wander at… | ||||||||
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06-18-2008, 11:39 AM
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Status: Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: K-Town Posts: 5
| just a verse i was tryna see how creative aggressiveness i can attain..i hope i'm succesfull..hope ya'll like it it's a rap or say urban poetry..deff. a new taste in K_town coz i bring heat on text like no other writer coz u know i'm wreckless..just havin' fun ya'll.........much respect and appreciation to all | ||||||||
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06-21-2008, 04:23 AM
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 Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: below the sky and above the ground :) Posts: 1,235
| not a big "rap" fan.. but the words in there are great.. uve just done such a good job.. its good to see that new writers are emerging and they're good at what they do  p.s. Quote:
keep it coming <peace!
__________________ Experience is the best teacher, it could be of high price sometimes! | |||||||||
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