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i have a poem...tell meh if ya'll like it!!!

TIME A PAINFUL CAGE

I remember,
You had drawned my ignorance,
Identified me the past, present, and future.
You paid a great humanity for time,
But time still launched you,
And i was aparted from you,
Losing your companionship and your paths.
I started my exploration,
And discovered your avenues too
against you, through my heart,
Still then I have the longing,
To cling on you as a child,
To elevate you
and
To love you
just for,
Not remaining solitude.


HOW'S DAT PPL??? LEMME KNOW..IIGHT??? EHEHHEE....itz oka..u dun hab to like da poem.. diff. ppl hab diff. opinions...i respect em all...
ehhehe....
peace!!!

wow sisi very goood....k ho i guess my sis has gone thru many trajic moments in life huh

dammi cha. You debate very well and now I see you right the poem too. Dammi .. go on.

thanx for appreciating mah work guys....ehhe...nd nesta broda...we can talk abt THE MOMENTS later...ehhee...lol....
anyways....m glad u guys like da poem...

u got no interest on nuttinn....so itz oka... :P... ..lol...m playin...well..thanx lyapche bro,..for takin out some moments of ur precious time to rite a comment on mah work... u r appreciated...
peace!!!

Copy/paste.......... j hos peom damiz chha .... jharpat lay laykayko haina yo poem ali damiz dimak bhayko lay laykayko huna parchha .. taraaa....

iight... chitraguptaa...it would b betta if u stay in ur limits....cuz if u dun like my work... shut the crap up nd keep it to urself... u have no rights to criticize mah work... i dun care wat arguments we had in da past abt stuffs... buh this is smtg that is very personal to meh..nd that i'd like to share it wit ppl that r cool wit meh..... if u dun like it.. shut da trash up..nd stay quiet.. dun b buggin around wid ur effiiiin mouth iight???? enuf is enuf myannn...
nd yea...dats rite...kunai jhar paat manchey le lekhya haina...cuz i wrote it.. nd if u dun believe it.... i dun give no shit... dun mess wit meh ... leave meh da hell alone... nd if ya dun like meh... itz betta... bak off then!!! COPY/PASTE re??? hasais.. may b u r used to doin that... buh I got brains nd i know how to use them... look at urself before u point at someone else... j vannu cha khurukka van na..kina kura ghumai firai vanchas??

sorry guys..plz excuse mah language... i apologize.. buh i needed ta speak.. i ain't gonna let nobody put meh down... especially... not mah feelings..
peace!!!

aaham aaham........... afulay nai laykayko bhaya ......... yati dhayrai bhuknau jarurii nai thiyana ni......... gr8 bhai halyo ni .... hehehehhe
jati kura gary pani last ma tayhi ho

bhukya haina...tolai vanya.... nd yea.... i m damn sure that u didn't undastand more than 50% of things written in there... so u won't undastand the things ive been tryn ta tell ya... dats about it...nuttin more than that... i juz want ya ta bak off...nd leave mah business da hell alone...iight??? dat'll prolly help u get rid of ur attitude... o well...if u r having a hard time understanding this....call someone over nd tell em to explain it to ya.. adios..
last ma ta tyahi ho!!!!
peace!!!