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08-29-2007, 01:30 PM
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 Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: below the sky and above the ground :) Posts: 1,235
|  ummmm.. was it that confusing clicky? k here's the story... Quote:
he better hurry up.. re k!  Quote:
did this click anywhere? hehe <peace!
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08-29-2007, 05:44 PM
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 Status: Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 474
| Okay shakku now I think I understand the situations... Earlier too I thought there were some time lapse between first and other paragraphs... Now I know that it was not the parting but one sided love that was speaking on first para.  | ||||||||
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08-30-2007, 04:27 AM
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Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: below the sky and above the ground :) Posts: 1,235
| u hit the right spot! good job.. hehehe <peace!
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09-04-2007, 08:10 PM
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Status: Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 9
| hehe gud one I had to say something. don't mind... I wish I was time, I would stop a while just for you to say that I can't stop forever.....and I am sorry. Your feeling to me is like a stream of gold water; Flowing in the abyss of reality, I have nothing but words to give you to make you cry, Although your love today is like the whole ocean in a spoon, But your life tomorrow is too big for my ground, a moon can't wish to be a sun a moon is a moon. Your love to me is way beyond any reason; A frog who learned to sing sweet will he say he is not happy to be loved? I have lived 1000 days on that rainy day; I can't wish it rains forever; Would you?... I don't have a canopy for the flood. Your feelings ain't a priority to me you say, Your feelings...A priceless diamond pendent.. the Jeweler needs to know the price. I ain't the neck where you will look more beautiful than you are, I ain't a prince to hold your hand I am just some one a little nice; Giving you warmth is not enough you would need a shelter someday, Your soul; I loved it yesterday more than tomorrow and today; Your soul unconditional your body needs things my words only wishes... It wished could wrap and protect you in hunger and sorrow; But all it could give you is a smile and tears with a miserable tomorrow. You'd say I know we shall thrive in the least we earn; Together in the worst is true love known; I can live when my stomach hurts of hunger. I can't die when I see you moan. In the rain where I said baby I love you; I never knew I would say this one day, Anything more I want is your happiness to this sudden sorrow I need to give to you today, Anything more I would want for you is to let go of our love; Someone luckier would be luckiest someday; Although I know what I have to loose and what I need to give; Forever my baby should forgive me for asking you to let go today forever please forgive. You don't HAVE TO ANSWER answer back. Last edited by Adarsh; 09-05-2007 at 12:13 AM.. | ||||||||
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09-05-2007, 05:56 AM
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Status: Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: below the sky and above the ground :) Posts: 1,235
| i wouldnt answer back anyways... i already said i wouldnt be writing poems anymore.. well atleast ima try not to.. lets see how that works... but good work... i dont understand why u have so much interest in replying to my poems with a poem.. no offense..just wondering! anyways, good work! <peace!
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